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Friday, July 26, 2019

Te Ahu Cinema Lion King - Draft Writing



When we went to Te Ahu cinema we watched the new Loin king it was funny exciting . So let me take you to the beginning. so Mufusa had a new born child called Simba. Rafiki put this kind of red paint on his head.Then he went to the pride the end of the pride rock and held him up and all the Elephant's and Giraffe's and Zebras came except his brother Scar.

Then he was a little bit  older then he went to his uncle Scar and he said I want to go somewhere he said go to the Elephants grave's it's where bones of Elephant's and bursting hot larva he went there but with Narla and one guide bird zazu he said lets go to the water hole and he did a nasty trick he was getting rid of zazu and then he lost him and he went to the Elephants grave's the huyens came and then they attack.

that was my favourite part Then he went to this place  and there were bulls coming Scar wanted to kill him so he can take pride rock and when Mufasa died they thought they killed Simba but they didn't. He felt so sad that he killed his dad. so he went away in the desert and he fell asleep and voulches were surrounding him and Pumba came to rescue but not to save an loin. then they said it's a loin run Pumba run what he cute and nice Timon say's he's a meat eater then he woke him up then took him to the jungle they sang there modo which was a Kuma ma ta ta and then he ad to learn to not be a meat eater and eat grubs after that he saw Nala and then they talked and talked then they were finished Nala said that the pride land is not pride anymore and he said no so he went back with Nala to save the Pridelands.






    

Thursday, July 4, 2019

Wonderful Sentences

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.

We know that wonderful sentences need:

  • detail (elaboration)
  • capital letters and full stops
  • Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
  • quality vocab - WOW words



WALT recognise different parts of speech.

Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi
Adjectives describe nouns.
Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
Verbs are doing words.
Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
Adverbs describe verbs.

Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.

EXAMPLES
The bird is angry .

The blue black bird is frowning in a mean way.


the bluey blackish bird is very angry .


the bluey blackish bird angrily 

straing at its prey.



The cat is sad.

The black cat is super duper sad .

The furry whiskery fluffy cat is so sad as she see her kitten leave  the nest .